Slitherpaw (Marshclan)

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{Tell me about yourself}

NAME: Slitherpaw
AGE:14 moons
GENDER: she-cat
CLAN: Marshclan
RANK: Apprentice
SHORT DESCRIPTION:

[/blockquote] cream-colored all over, with a grey belly and bright blue eyes

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LOOKS IN DETAIL:(optional) She has slightly large paws and a very long tail, and small, almost bear-like ears. Her eyes are black around the edges.
PERSONALITY: Edgy, but can focus and listen. Its very very hard to sneak up on her, because she is so jumpy.
FAMILY MEMBERS: Hollywater(wip) Talonheart(wip) Threshpaw(wip)
HISTORY:(optional) She was late into training, as she was injured as a kit in a venture from camp, in which she barely escaped a young fox with her life.
RP SAMPLE:(needed only for first bio)

[/blockquote] Slitherpaw ducked away from the foxes blow, feeling it graze her side. She whipped around furiously and raked her claws over its eye, before darting around and dragging her claws down its flank. She bit down hard on its tail, and it whipped around, aiming a bite directly at her neck...
Slitherpaw jumped from her nest, puffing. She shook her head vigorously, and sat down to groom herself. She could still feel the hot breath of the fox, and she exited the tiny apprentice den; It felt like it was closing in on her.

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[Bear]

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