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Post by ●Sparrow» on Apr 18, 2011 17:28:02 GMT -8
KIT TO APPRENTICE
[b]kit's name;[/b]
[b]kit's age;[/b]
[b]prefered mentor?;[/b]
APPRENTICE TO WARRIOR
[b]apprentice's name;[/b]
[b]creation age;[/b]
[b]current age;[/b]
[b]checklist links;[/b]
[b]preferred warrior name;[/b]
CHANGE OF NAME
[b]cat's current name;[/b]
[b]reason for change;[/b]
[b]cat's new name;[/b]
CURRENT CERMONIES NEEDED
none currently.
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Post by mystic on Apr 23, 2011 18:05:26 GMT -8
Do I post it here?
kit's name; Zypherkit
kit's age; Six moons
prefered mentor?; None
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Post by ●Sparrow» on Apr 24, 2011 13:48:47 GMT -8
yes you post it here  |
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Post by Bear on Dec 20, 2012 16:34:54 GMT -8
I read the first paragraph and scanned the rest. I don't like it much :/ The idea of a new team of 'Erin Hunter' that aren't even the same people just seems like...well, sort of like a rip off. If they wanted to write a book, they should have came up with a name of their own and let Erin Hunter be Erin hunter.
The writing style is completely different. It's obvious it's not the same people. Erin Hunter has more of a attention-grasping descriptive style, this style seems less descriptive and too...to the point, if I must say it that way.
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