Yus here be Robinpelt's character's!!

[{Robinpelt}]

SKYCLAN
Robinpelt- Light brown she cat with red paws,
tail, and chest (Warrior)

MISTCLAN
Dustpaw- Dark brown tabby Tom with green eyes, a torn ear,
And scars on his back left leg. (Warrior apprentice)

Larchsong- Very light grey (with darker flecks) she cat with green eyes (Warrior)

BREEZECLAN
Whitepaw- White tom with red paws, tail tip, and ears. Eyes are a dark green, and has only three legs, his back right one missing when he was born.
(Medicine cat apprentice)


MARSHCLAN -
Ivypaw- Gray she cat with black tabby stripes and amber eyes (Warrior apprentice)

LONERS/ROGUES-
Jester- Friendly dark grey tom with a limp and green eyes. (Loner)

[Bear]

I found myself groaning on the second page, to be honest. I couldn't stand it--please don't think I'm being rude; just expressing an opinion. I'm sure it's a delightful story, I just..couldn't get through it. The writing isn't as 'clean' or well put together as I had hoped, and the many different names of things is frankly...just...overused now. Finally, Lucky. Is he the one on the front page? The colors of Firepaw/heart/star? Ugh! And his name is 'Lucky' the most overused dog name in the world.

Now, because I know you will all bash me for my opinions; the good things:
It's sure to be an interesting book for those interested in it right now. There's going to be plenty of action, which I love, and surely some twists and turns around every corner. The characters are promising, besides the names--though I only read one--
I just don't like it; if you do, great I'm glad!