BreezeClan Status & Info [updated 5.03]

[Kelby [♥]]

she-cats ;; 6
toms ;; 7
total ;; 13
bans ;; none

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Leader

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maskedstar ;; small statured, long-furred creamy white tom with cinnamon colored tabby blotches, mask and tail ; gorgeous sapphire eyes flecked with ocean-colored undertones

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Deputy

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NONE --

Medicine Cats

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honeyfur ;; golden colored she-cat ; blue eyes
whitepaw ;; white, red tipped tom cat ; dark green eyes

Warriors

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firstwhisker ;; long haired red spotted tabby ; pale blue eyes
apprentice : mintpaw
hawkheart ;; brown black-tipped she-cat ; light gray eyes
oakfrost ;; tabby and white tom ; amber eyes
apprentice : luckypaw
shadowspirit ;; reddish-black she-cat ; pale green eyes
wolverinemask ;; medium-sized, short-furred orange tabby with a black-splattered face and one black paw ; large olive-green eyes.
apprentice : leopardpaw

Apprentices

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leopardpaw ;; tall, spotted tom cat
mentor : wolverinemask
luckypaw ;; brown and black classic tabby
mentor : oakfrost
mintpaw ;; blue she-cat ; mint green eyes
mentor : firstwhisker

Queens

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slitherpaw

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Kits

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sootkit ;; tall black spotted tabby tom ; yellow eyes

Elders

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NONE --

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Ceremonies needed

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leopardpaw » leopardstep (tenacity and independence)
mintpaw » mintfrost

Kit to apprentice

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[b]kit's name[/b] ;;
[b]kit's age[/b] ;;
[b]prefered mentor[/b] ;;

Apprentice to warrior

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[b]apprentice's name[/b] ;;
[b]creation age[/b] ;;
[b]current age[/b] ;;
[b]checklist links[/b] ;;
[b]preferred warrior name[/b] ;;

Change of name

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[b]cat's current name[/b] ;;
[b]reason for change[/b] ;;
[b]cat's new name[/b] ;;

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Apprentice checklist

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Before becoming a warrior, an apprentice must have completed the following tasks in roleplay. If the apprentice is under seven moons, all threads are to be completed. One thread may be subtracted each moon older than seven moons the apprentice is.

[/li][li] territory scouting
[/li][li] battle training(may be in same thread as hunting)
[/li][li] hunting training
[/li][li] gathering / moonstone visit
[/li][li] hunting assessment
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[Kelby [♥]]

Updated.

[Bear]

Now I'm always the optimistic one but,
I'm . . . disappointed :c
I was expecting a lot more and had high hopes.
The book sounds as if it was written by an average forum role-player.
Like Jadeflower said; It's rushed and choppy. They used to many dog-terms that they've yet to explain. They tell what's happening instead of showing what's happening. They're not descriptive; I can't picture in my head, a clear image of what's going on.
Over all,
I love the cover, and I love the whole idea of the book,
but I don't like the way it's written.
Sorry to say but, Survivors has just lost a fan~ :c