Falconfury and Siblings

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NAME:Falconfury
AGE:14 moons
GENDER: Tom
CLAN:Mistclan
RANK:Warrior
SHORT DESCRIPTIONFalconfury is a gray cat with black points, and brown creamed into his pelt. He hs no white, nor any spots. He has a course and short coat, and one blue eye, one bright brown eye. His tail has been cut off by a accident in the thorns growing up as a kit, and his ears are rather small, but in a cuddly way. His wiskers are long, but thin, so it looks like he has very few whiskers. :

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LOOKS IN DETAIL:Not going to do.
PERSONALITY::Falconfury is a brave and loyal cat whom cares not about you nor him. He cares about the clan and the clan alone. Kits are his favorite part, because he can watch them and smile as they grow up, his heart leaping for joy at at thier exitement of becoming apprenticed. He listens to others speak, and considers everything before making decisions, once again putting clan before anything.
FAMILY MEMBERS: Brothers: Skystalker, Frostclaw. Sisters:Spiderleap, Weasalclaw. Parents:Goldenclaw(mom.DEAD) Whitefang(dad...DEAD)
HISTORY:Not doing either.
RP SAMPLE: Falconfury looked up as Iceshatter walked into the camp, her white pelt gleaming, blue eyes standing out as the one of a kind eyes they are. Falconfury had spent many a moon trying to find another cat with those eyes, just to proove it was not only Iceshatter, but he had failed, miserably. Falconfury's tail twitched in fear as he stood up and started walking towards her. As he took a few steps, anger swelled inside him. Rainstorm walked up to her, and began to talk. Everyone in the clan knew Rainstorm was a flirt, and could bend any she-cat around him like it wasn't hard. Falconfury envied him because of this.

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{Behind the canvas}

SITE NAME:wajas.com
HOW DID YOU FIND US?: A warrior fan club had some warrior rp sites listed.
OTHER CHARACTERS:Spiderleap, Skystalker, Weasalclaw, Frostclaw
RP EXPERIENCE?: Yes.

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[Bear]

I'm disappointed. I really had good expectations for this series, but now they are gone. The writing was fast and rushed, they kept repeating things to the point of it becoming annoying, the character had no feeling, the writing style was horrible, it was so predictable, and I just wanted to stop reading after about two pages. I'm disappointed, I was really looking forward to this series.