Silverstorm [WIP]

[Dakota]

Name: Silverstorm
Rank: Warrior
Age: 26 moons
Gender: She-cat
Complexion: Russian blue fur with tiger stripes of grey and whiteo nface tail and back. Frosty Blue eyes
Clan: Breezeclan

[Bear]

There is no bias in what I have to say;

I'm disappointed. The sentances don't flow smoothly and the word choice is. . . icky.
It looks like my work and I'm not the best writer out there ;c